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Held down by bonds of love
chains forged over the years
cutting into my flesh and bone
and coated in acid
giving me septicemia.

Held down by bonds of love
slowly, painfully wearing away
at my body and soul
ripping deep gashes in me
tearing me to pieces.

Broken down by bonds of love
I lay bleeding on the ground
salting my wounds
with my tears.
©2008 ~iTeenager
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was in a bit of a dark mood today.
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~SAHazelnut:iconSAHazelnut: May 12, 2008, 11:55:45 PM
Though you were in a dark mood today I still think it's brillent work matey. I'm so sorry you feel that way and I can honestly relate. But like a said before good things happen to good people and your time will come. But as a friend I'll pick you up from the ground and wipe away your tears. Beacuse you're a great person matey and there's someone out there that will make you happy. :hug:

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~iTeenager:iconiTeenager: May 13, 2008, 6:36:43 PM
:hug: thank you so much. that really means a lot


and idk about you but i'd rather my poetry be dark than my mood (generally, i was a bit more cheerful than emo that day)

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~SAHazelnut:iconSAHazelnut: May 14, 2008, 12:31:15 AM
:hug: yw matey anytime.

Yeah I agree, sorry I just assmuse that is was your mood sorry matey.

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~iTeenager:iconiTeenager: May 14, 2008, 2:25:06 PM
hey, its okay. :hug: I WAS emo for part of the day (the morning... i'm never happy in the morning lollz). No need to apologize for thinking that! that just showed that you care :3

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To be loved and loved back... that's bliss. Unrequited love... constant agony.
~Zima, from "Chobits"
~SAHazelnut:iconSAHazelnut: May 14, 2008, 11:13:03 PM
ok but I'm still sorry :hug:. LOl who isn't it one part of the day that I hate. True:)

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~iTeenager:iconiTeenager: May 15, 2008, 6:30:42 PM
"good morning" is an oxymoron :XD:

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To be loved and loved back... that's bliss. Unrequited love... constant agony.
~Zima, from "Chobits"
~SAHazelnut:iconSAHazelnut: May 15, 2008, 11:42:29 PM
Omg I didn't trealised that before. I agree

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