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Another day to play this losing game
Lost in a crowd, just one among thousands
One among thousands, I am alone.

Another day to play this losing game
Trying to be heard, one voice among thousands
One among thousands, I am ignored.

Another day to play this losing game
Crying out for love, looking for just one...
One among thousands who plays this losing game too.
©2008 ~iTeenager
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eh... a crappy 1AM poem about how I feel pretty much every day.

...this is what happens when I'm lonely and listen to sad songs... I become quite pathetic (more than usual).


I am tired, Beloved,
of chafing my heart against the want of you;
of squeezing it into little inkdrops,
And posting it.
~Amy Lowell, "The Letter"
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~SAHazelnut:iconSAHazelnut: May 11, 2008, 3:47:52 AM
Matey I bleed the same use you. I never thought I meet someone with an equal understanding but think mine goes deeper. I don't think it's a crappy poem matey I think it's great. :hug: I'm sorry you feel that way.

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:headbang: Live each day as if it's your last :headbang:
~ellamartinez:iconellamartinez: May 11, 2008, 11:39:44 AM
i can relate and i like it its really cool. Good job

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*Emotional Ella*
~iTeenager:iconiTeenager: May 11, 2008, 2:25:47 PM
:hug: thanks. of all the poems i've ever written i think i like this one the best


hopefully i can kick this feeling before it consumes me completely

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To be loved and loved back... that's bliss. Unrequited love... constant agony.
~Zima, from "Chobits"
~iTeenager:iconiTeenager: May 11, 2008, 2:27:05 PM
thank you :hug:

i'm sorry you can relate. coz feeling like that sucks

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To be loved and loved back... that's bliss. Unrequited love... constant agony.
~Zima, from "Chobits"
~ellamartinez:iconellamartinez: May 11, 2008, 8:57:00 PM
:hug: your welcome

dont worry i'll be okay.

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*Emotional Ella*
~SAHazelnut:iconSAHazelnut: May 11, 2008, 11:49:22 PM
yw matey I think it's great

I think you will you're a strong person.

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:headbang: Live each day as if it's your last :headbang:
~iTeenager:iconiTeenager: May 12, 2008, 1:20:32 PM
i'm glad :hug:

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To be loved and loved back... that's bliss. Unrequited love... constant agony.
~Zima, from "Chobits"
~iTeenager:iconiTeenager: May 12, 2008, 1:21:20 PM
i'm trying. music helps

especially this song: (dont ask why lollz) [link]

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To be loved and loved back... that's bliss. Unrequited love... constant agony.
~Zima, from "Chobits"
~ellamartinez:iconellamartinez: May 12, 2008, 3:53:58 PM
:)

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*Emotional Ella*